Chapter 4: Where's Your Head At (Page 1)

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The greatest lie this comic ever told was that my Shepard's fish survived. Forgetting that they keep never making it to the Suicide Mission because I keep forgetting to feed them, they wouldn't have survived that destruction of the Normandy during that final run. Still, though: A man can dream.

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Okay. So, I know the rule was that I couldn't touch the pencils and edit them...but Shepard's face in Panel 4 was to' up from the flo' up. I had to at least fix the eye alignment and that's all I fixed. I promise. I didn't chance anything else. It was too hard to leave. Cut me some slack.

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Anyway, the colouring style changed again (of course) as this version felt like it would compliment the illustration better. I decided to go straight from pencil to colour as a deliberate stylistic choice and definitely not because I was too lazy to ink it. It was...ahem...deliberate.