Chapter 4: Where's Your Head At (Page 9)
This is another version that was previously just inked and I must be honest and say that I didn't like it. It was ratched and noisy and it brought me much grief. The colouring does make it more bearable. I still have a problem with the lineart on the last panel but rules is rules and I left it to allow for the record of my artistic growth. It's getting really hard to abide by that. I did break the rules, a bit, and finished the hatching on his hair. The previous version apparently made it read as though Commander Shepard was balding and we can't have that. He's not that stressed.
Chapter 4 was an all-round problem, for me. I really didn't bring my A-game.